PTE Writing Practice: Rewrite a Crowded Sentence Without Changing Its Meaning

A clear sentence gives the reader one main idea and makes its relationship to the next idea easy to follow. Practise revision on your own writing before trying to write faster.

Find the main claim first

Consider this original draft: “The college extended library hours and students had more time to study and it remained difficult for commuters because buses stopped early.” Separate the gain from the limitation: “Longer library hours gave students more time to study. However, commuters could not always use the extra time because buses stopped early.”

Compare the revised meaning

Underline the claim, the contrast and the cause in both versions. If the revision says all commuters could not use the library, it goes further than the original. Check for that change before moving on to grammar and punctuation.

Frequently asked question

Do short sentences always read better?

No. Use a longer sentence when it shows a clear relationship. Split it when multiple ideas compete for the reader’s attention.

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